Vanished 俳句

virgin starbeams sprint
night’s shroud strewn with rampant light
replaced with morn’s breath

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3 thoughts on “Vanished 俳句

  1. It is beautiful how you describe the transition between the night and the early morning. Love your choice of words and how you combine them like “virgin starbeams”, the contrast between “night’s shroud” and “rampant light”, and “morn’s breath”. Very powerful and lyrical. Thank you so much for checking out my blog but very often I feel I do not deserve it. There is a much better writer than me, whom I strongly recommend you and all your followers. It is my friend Mario Savioni. His novel “Pickles and Tarts” (very short chapters, easy to read), is a story where 54-year-old Frank has been selected by 19-year-old Nicole through a dating site. Frank looks at Nicole’s photos on the site and is attracted to her beauty. Nicole tells him she has a boyfriend and is not interested in a romantic relationship. She adds: “It’s fun to talk to different people sometimes.” The only apparent thing Frank and Nicole seem to have in common is their interest to write stories. Perhaps they want to meet just to write one together? “Pickles and Tarts” is a lovely story of illusion-delusion, dream-reality, non-conformist with the Capitalist system, reflective on love, sex and human relationships in today’s world. It is profound and highly intriguing:

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      1. Thank you. Yes, please, check out his blog. Mario is an excellent writter. Hope you like his work as much as I do. Me a very good poet? Well, thank you. You are too kind.

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